Slam poetry: expressing personal stories and emotions

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Think about these questions before watching. Share your ideas with a partner.

  1. What are some of the most powerful ways people can share their personal stories or strong emotions with others?
  2. Think about a time you struggled to put your feelings into words. What makes some emotions or experiences particularly difficult to articulate?
  3. In what ways can transforming a personal memory into a creative work, like a poem or a story, help a person to understand it better or heal from it?
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Watch the video carefully. Pay attention to the main ideas and key details.

Video script83 segments · click a timestamp to jump

Transcriber: Andrea McDonough Reviewer: Bedirhan Cinar

Miss Gayle's 5 Steps to Slam Poetry,

a lesson of transformation.

Step 1:

Write it all down.

"Take one memory,

explore it like a new land,"

the visiting poet tells the class.

"Don't leave anything out."

Tyler sits in this high school workshop,

dizzy with where to start.

Memories wander in and out of his heart

like vagrants searching for home.

He bends to his desk,

he writes,

"The snow goes black

when the moon turns its eyes away,

all paper is yellow,

all letters spell eviction note,

Mama's lies are footsteps

too many to count.

Making excuses on black snow.

'I paid the rent,

this is your room forever, baby.

I love you.'

But, she wouldn't even look at me."

Step 2:

Read out loud.

As he writes, his lips try on words

then toss them out like bad tenants.

He pushes his desk back,

stands.

"Aunt Jocelyn's rice pudding was sweet,

but that's not what I want to write.

Have you ever been so cold

your hair becomes an icicle?

Your little sister's fear of the dark

freezes on her lips

like she's kissed the ice tray?

How hungry have you been?"

Step 3:

Cut the fat.

Abandon extra words.

His pen becomes a machete,

slashing ands, thens, becauses.

Step 4:

Read out loud,

again.

The 11th grade boy makes sure

Step 3's cuts weren't too deep.

Step 5:

Add flava.

Juice,

power,

movement,

emotion.

"Vanilla flavoring is the secret to my aunt's pudding.

I kick out a few raisins but leave one or two.

Life needs some bitter

to man up the sweet."

His hands reach out like shells

to hold our disbelief.

Is this Tyler speaking?

The one who keeps his eyes on the floor

like they're carrying something heavy?

Voice rattles windows.

"I am free now."

Body quivers with the pulse of each word.

"The sun's joy melts snow."

Fingers trace the curve of his jaw.

"My aunt's face was warm as a water heater

when she let us in that night."

Our boy is done,

his transformation complete.

Step 1: Write it all down.

Step 2: Read out loud.

Step 3: Cut the fat.

Step 4: Read out loud.

Step 5: Add flava.

Tyler's first poem takes residence in his heart.

He flings his arms wide

like an open door.

Welcome home!

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Answer these questions in your own words. Support your answers with evidence from the video.

01What difficult memory does Tyler choose to write about during the first step of the process?
Sample answerHe writes about a really tough time when it seems his family was evicted from their home. He mentions an 'eviction note' and his mother lying about paying the rent.
02How does the video describe the process of 'cutting the fat' in Step 3?
Sample answerIt's described as a very aggressive editing process. The video says his pen becomes a 'machete' and he slashes extra words like 'ands' and 'becauses' to make the poem more direct and powerful.
03In what ways does Tyler's performance change after he follows Step 5, 'add flava'?
Sample answerHis performance becomes much more emotional and physical. Before, he was shy and looked at the floor, but now his voice 'rattles windows,' he uses hand gestures, and his whole body shows the emotion of the poem.
04Why is the final line, 'Welcome home!', significant for Tyler's transformation?
Sample answerIt's significant because his poem was about losing his home and feeling lost. By the end, he has processed that memory and found a new sense of belonging and confidence in himself and his poetry. He is welcoming himself home.
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Vocabulary

Vocabulary
These expressions will help you communicate more naturally about this topic.
To strike a chord with (someone) — to cause someone to feel sympathy or enthusiasm because it relates to their own feelings or experiences.
Usage note: This common idiom is used to describe how a story, poem, or idea emotionally affects an audience. For example, 'Tyler's poem about his childhood really struck a chord with the listeners.'
To lay bare (your soul/feelings) — to reveal your deepest and most private thoughts or emotions that were previously hidden.
Usage note: This is a powerful and somewhat dramatic expression. It's often used in contexts of deep confession, art, or therapy. For example, 'In his performance, he laid bare his soul for everyone to see.'
Vivid imagery — the use of language that creates strong pictures, sounds, or feelings in the mind.
Usage note: Use this phrase to describe writing or speech that is particularly descriptive. You can say a writer 'uses vivid imagery' or that their writing is 'full of vivid imagery.'
To get something off your chest — to tell someone about something that has been worrying you, in order to feel relieved.
Usage note: This is a common, informal idiom. It's perfect for conversations where you want to share a burden. For example, 'He used his poem as an opportunity to get years of frustration off his chest.'
To craft a narrative — to create a story or a description of events with skill and care.
Usage note: This phrase is slightly more formal than 'tell a story' and emphasizes the deliberate process of shaping a story for a specific effect. For example, 'The poet carefully crafted a narrative of hope and resilience.'
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Decide if each statement is true or false. Correct the false ones.

01In his first draft, Tyler uses the image of countless footsteps to describe his mother's dishonesty.
02The visiting poet instructed the students to focus exclusively on joyful memories for their poems.
03Tyler's physical presence transforms throughout the process, ending with a display of confidence.
04The fourth step in the poetry writing process is an exact repetition of the second step.
05In Step 3, 'cut the fat' means to remove unnecessary adjectives and adverbs from the poem.
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Discuss these questions with a partner. Try to use vocabulary from the lesson.

  1. The video presents slam poetry as a powerful tool for personal transformation. But is it always a good idea for people to lay bare their soul about traumatic experiences in a public performance? Discuss the potential benefits and risks.
  2. In many cultures, there are strong traditions of oral storytelling or poetry. How does the modern form of slam poetry compare to traditional forms in your culture? Do they serve a similar purpose, like helping people craft a narrative or get things off their chest?
  3. The poet uses vivid imagery like 'snow goes black' to make his story strike a chord with the audience. If you were to craft a narrative about a significant memory, what kind of imagery or metaphors might you use to make it powerful for others? You don't have to share the memory itself.