Venture capital: pitching with advanced conditionals

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Think about these questions before reading. Share your ideas with a partner.

  1. If you had the resources to launch any kind of business tomorrow, what societal problem or consumer inconvenience would you aim to solve, and what would be the core of your business model?
  2. Imagine you're a venture capitalist. Beyond the potential for a high return on investment, what intangible qualities in a founder or their pitch would persuade you to back their company?
  3. Reflect on a time you had to persuade someone of an idea, either professionally or personally. What strategies proved most effective, and what do you think is the biggest challenge in getting someone to see your vision?
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The Startup Pitch

Listen to the dialogue. Notice how the vocabulary and grammar from the lesson are used.

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Answer these questions in your own words. Support your answers with evidence from the article.

01What is Emma's primary concern about Marco's business proposal in the dialogue?
Sample answerHer main reservation is about the business's scalability, which is its ability to grow and handle more customers or work in an efficient and cost-effective manner.
02How does Marco plan to fund the company in its first year, and what is his initial goal?
Sample answerHe plans to bootstrap the company, meaning he will use personal finances or the company's own revenue. His initial goal is to prove the concept and 'get a foot in the door' of the market.
03What specific information does Emma require before she is willing to proceed to the 'due diligence' stage?
Sample answerShe requires a more detailed breakdown of the unit economics and the assumptions behind their financial projections to ensure the business model is sound.
04What does Marco's final statement suggest about his motivation for wanting to partner with Emma's firm specifically?
Sample answerHe states that what 'really stands out' is her firm's expertise, suggesting he values their knowledge and strategic guidance, not just their financial investment.
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Vocabulary

Vocabulary
These expressions will help you communicate more naturally about this topic.
Due diligence — the detailed research and investigation conducted on a company before making an investment or signing a contract.
Usage note: This is a standard business term. We often use the verbs 'conduct' or 'perform' with it, e.g., 'The investors are performing due diligence on our financials.'
To get a foot in the door — to succeed in taking the first step towards a goal, especially in a competitive field like business or a career.
Usage note: This idiom is common in both formal and informal contexts. It emphasizes gaining an initial opportunity that can be built upon later.
A ballpark figure — a rough numerical estimate or approximation.
Usage note: This is a common informal and business-casual phrase used when an exact number is not yet known. For example: 'Can you give me a ballpark figure for the Q3 sales projections?'
To pivot — to make a fundamental change in strategy when a business discovers its initial approach or product isn't succeeding.
Usage note: This verb has become extremely common in the startup world. A company might 'pivot to a new market' or 'pivot away from its original business model'.
To bootstrap — to build a company from the ground up with only personal finances or the money it generates, without accepting external investment.
Usage note: This term highlights self-sufficiency. It's often used to contrast with companies that seek venture capital, e.g., 'They bootstrapped the company for three years before looking for investors.'
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Business and investment collocations

Complete the phrases commonly used when discussing business strategy and investment.

Match each item on the left with the correct item on the right.

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Definitions
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Grammar: Advanced conditionals with inversion

Grammar
In formal English, especially in persuasive contexts like business pitches, we can make conditional sentences more emphatic by omitting 'if' and inverting the subject and auxiliary verb (had, were, should). This structure adds a level of formality and sophistication to your language, making it ideal for high-stakes negotiations or proposals.
Had we secured the initial funding, we would have launched six months earlier.
This structure (Had + subject + past participle) replaces 'If we had secured...' and refers to an unreal past condition.
Were our scalability to increase by 50%, we would dominate the market within two years.
Use 'Were + subject + to-infinitive' for hypothetical future situations. It sounds more formal than 'If our scalability were to increase...'.
Should you decide to invest, you will see a significant return on your investment.
This is a formal and polite alternative to 'If you decide to invest...'. It's often used in business correspondence to discuss potential future actions.
  • Remove 'if' and invert the subject and auxiliary verb (had, were, should).
  • Use 'had' for unreal past conditions (replaces the 3rd conditional).
  • Use 'were' for unreal present or future conditions (replaces the 2nd conditional).
  • Use 'should' for possible, though perhaps unlikely, future conditions (a formal alternative to the 1st conditional).
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Spot the mistake

The following sentences are taken from business pitches and investment meetings. Can you find the errors?

Each sentence contains one error. Find and correct it.

01Had I knew about the market instability, I would have delayed the product launch.
Corrected version
Had I knew known about the market instability, I would have delayed the product launch.
02Before investing, it's crucial to make a thorough due diligence on the startup's financials.
Corrected version
Before investing, it's crucial to make conduct a thorough due diligence on the startup's financials.
03Should you will require any further clarification, our CFO is available to speak with you.
Corrected version
Should you will require any further clarification, our CFO is available to speak with you.
04It's incredibly difficult to get a foot on the door of the venture capital world without a strong network.
Corrected version
It's incredibly difficult to get a foot on in the door of the venture capital world without a strong network.
05Were the board to approved the merger, we would become the market leader overnight.
Corrected version
Were the board to approved approve the merger, we would become the market leader overnight.
06I can't give you an exact number, but a ballpark number would be around two million dollars.
Corrected version
I can't give you an exact number, but a ballpark number figure would be around two million dollars.
07When our initial strategy failed, we had to quickly pivot on a new business model focused on subscriptions.
Corrected version
When our initial strategy failed, we had to quickly pivot on to a new business model focused on subscriptions.
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Useful phrases: Giving feedback on a business proposal

Vocabulary
After someone presents a business idea or proposal, you'll often need to give constructive feedback. These phrases will help you ask critical questions and share your opinion in a professional and diplomatic way, whether you're an investor, a manager, or a colleague.
I can see a lot of potential here, but I'm wondering about the go-to-market strategy. — To soften a critical question by leading with a positive observation.
Register: Neutral/Formal. Use this to open your feedback. It shows you're engaged but have a specific area you want to probe deeper into. You can replace the final part with any area of concern (e.g., '...the competitive landscape,' '...the revenue model').
My main reservation is around the scalability. — To clearly and politely state your biggest point of concern.
Register: Formal. A diplomatic way to express a significant doubt or worry. It's less confrontational than saying 'I don't think it's scalable' and invites discussion rather than defense.
Could you walk me through the assumptions behind your financial projections? — To request a detailed explanation of their data or calculations.
Register: Formal. This is a standard and professional way to ask for the thinking and data that support their numbers, without directly saying you doubt them.
What really stands out is the team's domain expertise. — To give a specific, high-level compliment.
Register: Neutral/Formal. Use this to highlight a key strength you've identified. It shows you're not just looking for flaws and can be used to build rapport before asking tougher questions.
Have you stress-tested that assumption? For example, what if customer acquisition costs are 50% higher? — To challenge a key idea or projection in a constructive way.
Register: Neutral/Formal. 'Stress-testing' is a common business term for testing a plan against worst-case scenarios. This question pushes the presenter to show they've considered potential risks.
It's a compelling vision, but the unit economics need to be clearer for me. — To summarise your feedback, combining a positive point with a clear condition for moving forward.
Register: Formal. A good way to conclude your feedback. It acknowledges the idea's appeal while stating a non-negotiable requirement for your support or investment.
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The startup funding journey

Read the passage about the process of securing investment for a new business.

Fill in each blank with the correct word or phrase from the word bank.

Word bank
Many successful entrepreneurs initially their companies, using personal savings to get started. However, to achieve significant growth, most need to secure external funding, which can be the hardest part; just getting a in the door with a venture capital firm is a major achievement. During the pitch, founders are often asked for on future revenue, even if it's just a rough estimate. Should the investors show interest, they will conduct thorough to verify all claims. It's also common for startups to their business model after early feedback, demonstrating adaptability to the market.
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Words to take with you

Vocabulary
These expressions are not in the article but will help you discuss this topic more fluently.
Angel investor — a wealthy individual who provides capital for a business start-up, often in exchange for ownership equity.
Use this to distinguish from a venture capital firm. An angel investor is an individual, often investing their own money at a very early stage. Example: 'Before we approached any VCs, we secured our initial funding from an angel investor who believed in our vision.'
Burn rate — the speed at which a new company is spending its capital before it starts generating its own income.
This is a key metric for investors. A high burn rate can be alarming if the company isn't showing progress. Common collocations: 'high/low burn rate', 'to reduce the burn rate'. Example: 'Our monthly burn rate is around $50,000, so we have about six months of runway left.'
Sweat equity — the non-monetary contribution someone makes to a business project, such as their time and effort, in exchange for a stake in the company.
This is common for founders or early employees who may accept a lower salary in exchange for shares. It highlights the value of hard work over cash. Example: 'As I couldn't invest money, I contributed sweat equity by developing the entire software platform myself.'
To go public — to start selling shares of a formerly private company on a public stock exchange, through a process called an Initial Public Offering (IPO).
This is often seen as a major goal or 'exit strategy' for a successful startup and its investors. Example: 'After years of rapid growth, the board decided it was the right time for the company to go public.'
Disruptive innovation — an innovation that creates a new market, eventually displacing established market-leading firms and products.
Use this to describe an idea that completely changes an industry, rather than just improving an existing one. Think of how smartphones were a disruptive innovation for the camera industry. Example: 'Investors are always looking for the next disruptive innovation that could redefine an entire sector.'
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Choose the best answer based on the dialogue and vocabulary from the lesson.

01In the dialogue, what does Emma mean when she says the 'unit economics need to be clearer'?
02When Marco says he plans to 'bootstrap' for the first year, what does this imply?
03What is the purpose of the 'due diligence' stage that Emma mentions?
04If a startup has to 'pivot', what is it doing?
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Discuss these questions with a partner. Try to use vocabulary from the lesson.

  1. Some entrepreneurs argue that bootstrapping a company ensures its mission remains pure, while others believe seeking venture capital is essential for rapid scalability. Which approach do you think is more viable in today's economy, and at what point, if any, does external investment compromise a founder's original vision?
  2. Considering the business culture in your home country, how easy is it for a new entrepreneur to 'get a foot in the door' and secure seed funding? What are the biggest hurdles they face, and what changes, were they to be implemented, would most improve the environment for startups?
  3. Imagine you are an investor who has just completed due diligence on a promising startup. During the final meeting, the founder mentions a potential need to pivot their core business model within the first year. Does this news inspire confidence due to their foresight, or does it raise red flags about their initial strategy? Justify your decision to either proceed with or withdraw your investment.